考研英语二2011年大作文实例分析与批改

备战2011年考研英语大作文，先从研读经典高分范文开始。本文汇集的启航教育批改范文中，不仅有原文、批注，还有词汇注释与亮点解析。准备2027考研的同学，可联系启航教育在线咨询考研英语二写作高分规划。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly dipicts marketing percentage of some brands in domestic car market in 2008 and 2009.In 2008，the percentage of domestic brands was approximately 25%,but by 2009, the rate had gradually risento around 30%.In contrast,the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a slow decline of about 10% during the same period.Simultaneously,the percentage of America brands remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start

with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford domestic automobiles that were previously deemed . In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, he fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s anufacturing industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic cars is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanise cars will likely continue to decrease relatively.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：ketin

批改：market

原文：nt

批改：空格

原文：eric

批改：American

原文：domestic brands was approximately 25%,but by 2009, the rate had gradually risento around 30%.In contrast,the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a slow decline of about 10% during the same period.Simultaneously,the percentage of America brands remained stable and steady.

批改：描述图表比较到位，数据清楚明确，结构合理并完整，注意一些细节问题哦。

原文：ed

批改：deemed luxury items.

原文：he

批改：the

原文：nufa

批改：manufacturing

原文：nomic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford domestic automobiles that were previously deemed . In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, he fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s anufacturing industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprisi

批改：原因分析和现象解释还是比较到位的，句子结构比较地道，有论述，有讨论。

原文：ani

批改：Japanese

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

语法：语法注意空格，单词不能写错，不能漏字母哦，the漏掉了t，就变成和he，这语法就错了，细节要注意。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，整体很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，也有写错的哦，注意修改。

内容：内容比较符合题意要求，结构合理。

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