考研英语一2010年大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语一写作冲刺每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2010年考研英语一批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon，there is a culture hot pot，which consists of Lao She、Bi Sheng 、Chinese kung fuand so on。Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to reads that it is cultural interactions that play an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost/On the one hand, the cultural interaction can ignite our creativity, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming.

What"s more,the cultural interaction holds an exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for boosting overall national strength further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

In brief, the cultural interaction is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice .Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brillance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：reads

批改：readers

原文：s shown in the cartoon，there is a culture hot pot，which consists of Lao She、Bi Sheng 、Chinese kung fuand so on。Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to reads that it is cultural interactions that play an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

原文：/

批改：逗号

原文：On

批改：on小写

批改：加逗号

原文：is phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost/On the one hand, the cultural interaction can ignite our creativity, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. What"s more,the cultural interaction holds an exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for boosting overall national strength further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：In brief, the cultural interaction is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice .Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brillance.

批改：该段再次总结强调写作的中心，起到了点题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17/20

内容切题，准确全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯，注意正确使用标点断句；语法方面，语法基础较好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节性错误会更好。继续加油。

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