考研英语二2016年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、考研英语二2016年大作文题目

考研英语二2016年大作文Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、考研英语二2016年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the purpose of traveling in a certain university. Enjoying the landscape takes the lead at 37%, followed by releasing pressure at 33%. Additionally, factors such as making friends, cultivating the ability of independence, and other purposes are also considered, accounting for 9%, 6%, and 15%, respectively.

The core reasons for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, students are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of students choose to travel rather than stay at home. In addition, as the saying goes, "on life"s stage, pressure is always present". Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense academic pressure, and as a result, taking trips has become their significant choice for utilizing leisure time.

What about the future? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of university students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the purpose of traveling in a certain university. Enjoying the landscape takes the lead at 37%, followed by releasing pressure at 33%. Additionally, factors such as making friends, cultivating the ability of independence, and other purposes are also considered, accounting for 9%, 6%, and 15%, respectively.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：The core reasons for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, students are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of students choose to travel rather than stay at home. In addition, as the saying goes, "on life"s stage, pressure is always present". Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense academic pressure, and as a result, taking trips has become their significant choice for utilizing leisure time.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：future

批改：future trends

原文：What about the future? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of university students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。

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