考研英语一2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2011年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2011年大作文题目

考研英语一2011年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2011年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon,there are two boys sitting on a boat and pouring rubbish into a lake.Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that discarding rubbish randomly is an issue that requires great attention both in our personal lives and in society.This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand,discarding rubbish random is like a heavy chain that hinders children"s progress, leaving them with a negative outlook on life and preventing them from shining brightly in future society.On the other hand,cooperation holds an exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for safe guarding public health,further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

How can we put an end to the problem of discarding rubbish randomly? It is suggested by many that we need a package deal, including enhancing supervision and issuing related laws. But would these measures be comprehensive enough? In reality, we also need to strengthen self discipline. With the support of these measures, we can effectively tackle the issue at its core.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：s shown in the cartoon,there are two boys sitting on a boat and pouring rubbish into a lake.Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that discarding rubbish randomly is an issue that requires great attention both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：描述漫画内容，揭示漫画背后所反映的社会现象和深刻哲理，清晰直观。

原文：random

批改：randomly 用副词形式

原文：safe guarding

批改：单词中间没有空格

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand,discarding rubbish random is like a heavy chain that hinders children"s progress, leaving them with a negative outlook on life and preventing them from shining brightly in future society.On the other hand,cooperation holds an exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for safe guarding public health,further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

批改：rando

原文：ow can we put an end to the problem of discarding rubbish randomly? It is suggested by many that we need a package deal, including enhancing supervision and issuing related laws. But would these measures be comprehensive enough? In reality, we also need to strengthen self discipline. With the support of these measures, we can effectively tackle the issue at its core.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17/20

作文对漫画的理解到位，写作思路紧扣主题，有些短语句式的表达也不错，基本能够传达清楚作者的写作意图，但还需注意：作文建议采取三段式，不要把所有内容都堆砌在一段，会导致重点不突出，结构不清晰。

内容：这幅漫画中细节比较多，但最核心的内容比较明确，那就是旅游过程中游客的不恰当行为造成环境污染。该图显示水面上有一艘观光船，两个游客随手乱扔垃圾，水面上漂浮着各种各样的废弃物。很多考生拿到试卷后的第一反应就是写如何保护环境，再细心一点的考生就写成如何保护景区环境。可是，这幅图不仅要强调被破坏的环境，还要强调造成这种环境污染的缘由——游客甚至是人类的不恰当行为。这样表达文章意思才全面。

整体来看，作文理解了漫画内涵，段落框架明确，大体上与题目要求保持一致，但是在表达上还存在一定问题。从点评中可以看出作文中有一些表述不当之处，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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