考研英语一2025年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

启航教育作为考研英语培训领域的知名品牌，每年都会整理发布当年的启航考研英语高分范文。本文呈现的2025年考研英语一大作文批改例文中，每一处失分点都已被老师精准订正，是2027考生不可错过的写作资料。

一、考研英语一2025年大作文题目

考研英语一2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the table below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the table briefly, 2) interpret the table, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2025年大作文批改例文

Elaborately and distinctly, this table given above depicts the average ownership of major durable consumer goods per 100 households in China in recent years. First and foremost, in 2014, the number of air conditioners was 75.2,but by 2023,this figure had substantially risen to 145.9.Meanwhile,the number of washing machines and refrigerators experienced a slow increase of 14.5 and 17.9 respectively,during the same period.

Several factors contribute to the observed phenomenon, with the following two standing out.To begin with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace ,allowing them to afford household appliances that was previously deemed luxury items. In addition,against the backdrop of our country’s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1900s and 2000s,are accustomed to using household appliances and have become the primary consumer group.Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon is unsurprising.

In light of the above analysis,we may reasonably conclude that the number of air conditioners, washing machines and refrigerators is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the foreseeable future.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：household appliances that was previously deemed luxury items

批改：“appliances” 是复数名词，定语从句的谓语需对应为 “were”

原文：1900

批改：1990s

原文：5.2,

批改：75.2, but

原文：the number of air conditioners, washing machines and refrigerators is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the foreseeable future.

批改：“the number（数量）” 无法直接对应 “social improvement（社会进步）”，应改为 “The growing ownership of these household appliances is a clear sign of social improvement”（“拥有量的增长” 才是社会进步的体现）。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：15分

结构完全契合考研大作文要求：清晰覆盖 “图表描述 - 原因分析 - 总结展望” 三个核心板块，段落衔接自然，阅卷老师能快速捕捉到你的写作逻辑；数据描述准确，能精准区分空调的 “大幅增长” 与洗衣机、冰箱的 “缓慢增长”，且数值计算正确，体现了审题的细致性；

原因分析有层次，明确划分论述要点，逻辑框架是得分的基础保障。

问题在于，基础语法错误，主谓一致错误是必扣分点，这是考研阅卷中 “一眼就能发现” 的基础语法错误，考前必须专门排查这类问题。考前这段时间，需要重点去避免这种必扣分项，保持状态，加油~

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