考研英语一2017年大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语一大作文每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2017年考研英语一批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

The two pictures present a sharp contrast: one boy ignores the books around him, while the other makes a yearly reading plan of 20 books. This scene reflects a common social phenomenon and conveys a profound message about reading.

Nowadays, the fast-paced life makes people eager for quick success and instant benefits, and few are willing to spend time reading quietly. Some only use books as decorations to show off their taste. But reading can help us relieve stress and acquire the wisdom to solve problems. Without real reading actions, even a room full of books is meaningless.

We should change this situation. For ourselves, we can set small daily reading goals. For the whole society, public media can advocate reading culture. In this way, we can form a good reading atmosphere and make reading a part of daily life.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The two pictures present a sharp contrast: one boy ignores the books around him, while the other makes a yearly reading plan of 20 books. This scene reflects a common social phenomenon and conveys a profound message about reading.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

原文：Nowadays, the fast-paced life makes people eager for quick success and instant benefits, and few are willing to spend time reading quietly. Some only use books as decorations to show off their taste. But reading can help us relieve stress and acquire the wisdom to solve problems. Without real reading actions, even a room full of books is meaningless.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。

原文：We should change this situation. For ourselves, we can set small daily reading goals. For the whole society, public media can advocate reading culture. In this way, we can form a good reading atmosphere and make reading a part of daily life.

批改：能够提出自己的建议，起到了总结和再次呼应主题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础很好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬，继续加油。

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