考研英语二2011年大作文实例分析与批改

2011年考研英语二大作文围绕哪一类话题命题？本文精选的范文聚焦考研英语二作文模板话题方向，结合启航教育多年考研英语二教学沉淀，从描述图表、解读寓意到发表评论三大角度，完整呈现高分作文的内在结构。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart below vividly presents the market share of various car brands from different countries in the domestic car market in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, approximately one-third of the market was occupied by Japanese brands, while domestic and American brards collectively accounted for about 40%. By 2009, domestic brands took the place of Jananese brands and occupied the largest market share.

It is barely difficult for us to figure out that domestic brands have developed rapidly in recent years, whether in the antomotive industry or other fields. In the automotive market, the share of domestic vehicles, especially electric vehicles , has soared. Homebred new energy cars are gradually replacing Japanese and American brand gasoline vehicles and entering millions of household. Reasonable prices, low energy consumption, comfortable driving experience. All these features make them not afraid of any classic brands from abroad.

The changes in the market share of car not only reflect the rapid progress of intelligent manufacturing in China, but also demonstrate consumers" trast and affection for domestic brands. It is believed that, with the progress of demestic technology and industry, more and more affordable and user-friendly devices made in China will be available to every single family.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart below vividly presents the market share of various car brands from different countries in the domestic car market in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, approximately one-third of the market was occupied by Japanese brands, while domestic and American brards collectively accounted for about 40%. By 2009, domestic brands took the place of Jananese brands and occupied the largest market share.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：It is barely difficult for us to figure out that domestic brands have developed rapidly in recent years, whether in the antomotive industry or other fields. In the automotive market, the share of domestic vehicles, especially electric vehicles , has soared. Homebred new energy cars are gradually replacing Japanese and American brand gasoline vehicles and entering millions of household. Reasonable prices, low energy consumption, comfortable driving experience. All these features make them not afraid of any classic brands from abroad.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：trast

批改：trust

原文：demestic

批改：domestic

原文：The changes in the market share of car not only reflect the rapid progress of intelligent manufacturing in China, but also demonstrate consumers" trast and affection for domestic brands. It is believed that, with the progress of demestic technology and industry, more and more affordable and user-friendly devices made in China will be available to every single family.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13 /15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：在第二段分析原因时，我们可以有两个选择，一是只分析中国品牌占比上升的原因，二是可以加上日本品牌占比下降的原因，关于日本品牌占比下降的原因，可以写日本品牌一些不当行为导致其声誉下降，进而影响其销量等原因。

整体来看，主要是细节错误，有时间好好看看文中的批改，细心吸收，争取在接下来的练习中避免类似的错误。

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