2019年考研英语二大作文实例分析与批改

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一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the destinations of undergraduate graduates at a certain university in 2013 and 2018. In 2013, the percentage of getting a job was 68.1%, but by 2018, the rate has decreased to 60.7%. In contrast, the proportion of continuing their study experienced a increase of 7.7% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of starting up business remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, more and more people consider that continuing their study will help them to find a better job in the future. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges and chances, educational background is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of continuing their study will steadily increase in the following decades. In controst, the proportion of getting a job will likely continue to drease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：a

批改：前半句用了过去式，这里要一致哦，had decreased

原文：a

批改：an

原文：18. In 2013, the percentage of getting a job was 68.1%, but by 2018, the rate has decreased to 60.7%. In contrast, the proportion of continuing their study experienced a increase of 7.7% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of starting up business remained stable and stea

批改：描述图表还是不错的，数据清楚准确，句子结构完整，句式多样，注意一些语法错误哦。

原文： find a better job in the future. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges and chances, educational background is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsur

批改：写的不错，分析透彻，句子完整具体，内容丰富充实 。

原文：as

批改：decrease

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

语法：语法时态和不定冠词a,an的用法哦。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，整体很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，有一个写错的。

内容：内容比较符合题意要求，结构合理。

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