2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2014年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二真题教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The line chart clearly depicted the changes in the urban population and rural population from 1990 to 2010.In 1990s, the number of urban population was 834 millions, but by 2010s, this figure substantially risen to 666 millions .In contrast, the number of rural population experienced significant decline of 160 millions during the some from 1990 to 2010.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese social is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.In addition,as the conductor of changes,our government has made efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace,enabling them to buy houses in cities .

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：millions

批改：million 跟在具体数字后面不加s

原文：risen

批改：rose

原文： millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：some

批改：same period

原文：social

批改：society 用名词形式

原文：e line chart clearly depicted the changes in the urban population and rural population from 1990 to 2010.In 1990s, the number of urban population was 834 millions, but by 2010s, this figure substantially risen to 666 millions .In contrast, the number of rural population experienced significant decline of 160 millions during the some from 1990 to 2010.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese social is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.In addition,as the conductor of changes,our government has made efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace,enabling them to buy houses in cities

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue decrease.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

原文：continue

批改：continue to 补充介词

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12 /15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：首段简洁描述图表核心数据，突出城乡人口变化趋势。中间段分析变化原因，包括经济发展、城市基础设施优势等，同时指出城市化带来的问题。尾段提出政府应采取措施缓解城市化负面影响，体现对社会问题的关注。

整体来看，主要是细节错误，但要多用自己的语言去进行表达，避免和范文重复，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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