2013年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2013年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2013年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2013年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts working in spare time of the university.In first year,the percentage of number was 67.77%,but by last year,the rates had risen 10.47%.In contrast, the middle years remained steadily.

The phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways,but two of them are particularly significant.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes,our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education and work system,enabling university students to have ample opportunities to work in spare time,drive economic growth and help them to adapt the future lives. In addition,against the backdrop of our country’s rapid and dynamic development,the younger generation,particularly those born in the 1900s and 2000s are accustomed to working before graduate.Considering these factors,the phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of students,and will likely remain relatively stable increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：university

批改：后加students

原文：working

批改：the proportion of taking part-time jobs

原文：number

批改：freshmen taking part-time jobs

原文： 10.47%

批改：to 88.24%

原文：middle years

批改：proportion of sophomore and junior students

原文：steadily

批改：steady

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts working in spare time of the university.In first year,the percentage of number was 67.77%,but by last year,the rates had risen 10.47%.In contrast, the middle years remained steadily.

批改：在描述图表信息时要注意语言的准确性。

批改：加逗号断句

原文：graduate

批改：before是介词，改成graduation

原文：e phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways,but two of them are particularly significant.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes,our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education and work system,enabling university students to have ample opportunities to work in spare time,drive economic growth and help them to adapt the future lives. In addition,against the backdrop of our country’s rapid and dynamic development,the younger generation,particularly those born in the 1900s and 2000s are accustomed to working before graduate.Considering these factors,the phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of students,and will likely remain relatively stable increase in the following decades.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，要注意正确区分词性，介词后加名词或动名词；句式和语法方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是在描述图表信息时要注意句子结构的完整；

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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