2011年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二作文范文每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2011年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The line chart clearly depicts how many cars of different brands were sold in China .In 2008s, the percentage of Chinese cars was approximately 25%,but by 2009s, this rate had substantially risen to 35%.In contrast, the percentage of Japanese cars experienced a significant decline of about 10%during the some from 2008s to 2009s. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country＇s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese cars will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：2008s

批改：具体的年份不需要加s，只有1980s 这种需要加，表示上世纪八十年代

原文：2009s

批改：2009

原文：some

批改：same period

原文：2008s

批改：2008

原文：2009s

批改：2009

原文：he line chart clearly depicts how many cars of different brands were sold in China .In 2008s, the percentage of Chinese cars was approximately 25%,but by 2009s, this rate had substantially risen to 35%.In contrast, the percentage of Japanese cars experienced a significant decline of about 10%during the some from 2008s to 2009s. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country＇s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese cars will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars will likely continue to decrease.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13 /15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：在第二段分析原因时，我们可以有两个选择，一是只分析中国品牌占比上升的原因，二是可以加上日本品牌占比下降的原因，关于日本品牌占比下降的原因，可以写日本品牌一些不当行为导致其声誉下降，进而影响其销量等原因。

整体来看，主要是表述时间的说法要注意，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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