2015年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

2015年考研英语二大作文属于典型的图表作文，要求考生准确描述数据变化并深入解读现象。本文精解的这篇饼图批改范例，完整覆盖考研英语二大作文常考图表的描述思路，是考研英语图表类作文的标杆范例。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

2.15人 必须使用黑色字迹书写:在答题卡区域内作答,超出黑色矩形边框限定区域的答案无效。

The Pie chart clearly displays the percentage break-down of various consume of spiring festival among certain residence in China. new year life takes the lead at 40%, followed by traffic, geathering dinner, and other factors are also considered, accouting for 20%，20%，and 20%. respectively

The core reasons for the observed Phenomenon can be summanzed as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic devolopment, the youger generation, Particularly those born is the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to exchanging new year life and have become the Primary new year life consumer group，In addition, as the saying goes," on lite"s stage，Pressure is always Present, People are compelled to confront immense life Pressure, and as a result, traffic, gathering dinner. has emerged as their significant choice for new years. Considering these factors, the dipicted Phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

what about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of People, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades

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三、考研英语作文批改

原文： spiring festival

批改：春节的表示，the Spring Festival ，习惯加冠词the , 首字母大写

原文：consume

批改：这里应该用名词词性，改为 consumption

原文： residence

批改：单词辨析错误， 图表标题是居民，改为 residents​

原文：life

批改：根据图表，改为 gifts​

原文：takes

批改：主语是复数名词 gifts​，谓语动词不用单三，改为 take

原文：geathering

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 gathering​ 。聚会吃饭的表达 gatherings and dining

原文：summanzed

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 summarized​

原文：P

批改：小写，检查下文同类型错误，不在句首的单词首字母小写

原文：devolopment

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 development​

原文：youger

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 younger

原文：lite"s

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 life"s​

原文：dipicted

批改：单词拼写错误，改为depicted​

原文：break-down

批改：改为 breakdown

原文：certain

批改：图表标题中某市，应该改为 in a certain city

原文： life

批改：同上，改为 gifts

原文：new year

批改：New Year 专有名词，大写，检查下文类似错误

原文：，

批改：句号

原文：gathering dinner.

批改：聚会吃饭的表达 gatherings and dining

原文：has

批改：主语是复数，改为 have

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：8 /15

从结构层面看，本文脉络清晰，采用三段式写作，开头清楚表明图片，中间进行了分析，最后做出了总结；

从内容层面看，第一段新年礼物的翻译一直是错的，这几项花费的翻译也不太对。这些要在平时多积累；

从语言层面看，单词拼写和语法上错误较多

建议：检查单词拼写、大小写、标点符号，语法上主谓一致、词性区分、专有名词前加冠词the ，加油！

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