2015年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

当你坐在考研英语二考场，面对2015年大作文题目的那一瞬间，是否能快速组织起一篇结构清晰、表达地道的高分文章？本文这篇批改例文，正是考研英语二写作技巧话题下的标准范本，适合每一位考研英语备考生反复研读。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie clearly displays the percentage breakdown of theresident proportion ofcertain city expense in our country in spring. New year gifttakes the lead at 40%, followed by transporting, party and others all at 20%.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has

made tremedous efforts to drive economic growth and elevatethe purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to enjoy a happier year. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particular those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to giving new year gifts with each other, and have become the primary cosumer group. Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the pie is unsurprising.

what about future trends？l am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of consumer, serving as a microcosm the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：pie

批改：pie chart

原文：theresident proportion ofcertain city expense

批改：expenses among residents of certain city

原文：spring

批改：Spring Festival holiday

原文：The pie clearly displays the percentage breakdown of theresident proportion ofcertain city expense in our country in spring. New year gifttakes the lead at 40%, followed by transporting, party and others all at 20%.

批改：在描述图表信息时要注意语言的准确性。

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremedous efforts to drive economic growth and elevatethe purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to enjoy a happier year. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particular those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to giving new year gifts with each other, and have become the primary cosumer group. Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the pie is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：what

批改：what首字母大写

原文：consumer

批改：复数

批改：加of

原文：what about future trends？l am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of consumer, serving as a microcosm the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，名词单复数要使用正确；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构的正确和完整；语法方面，总体来看语法基础还不错。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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