2015年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

本文将启航教育一对一批改过的2015年考研英语二高分范文进行公开呈现。批改老师对文中每一个失分细节进行了精确标注，对照考研英语写作模板热点话题与评分细则，你可以快速了解考研英语写作的提分方向。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the expenditure of the Spring Festival among residents in a certain city in China. New Year"s gift takes the lead at 40%. Additionally, factors such as transportation, meeting and eating, and others are also considered, accounting for 20%, 20%, and 20%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford New Year"s gifts that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in 1985s and 1990s, are accustomed to meeting and eating with their friends and traveling with their family members and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of the residents in China, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：gift

批改：要用复数gifts

原文：takes

批改：前面改成复数 后，这里要用原形take

原文：meeting and eating

批改：不是很恰当，聚餐可以用dinner parties

原文：1985s

批改：前面要加定冠词the，另外没有1985s这个说法，要改为1980s

原文：meeting and eating

批改：同前文，应改为holding dinner parties

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford New Year"s gifts that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in 1985s and 1990s, are accustomed to meeting and eating with their friends and traveling with their family members and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：分析了新年礼物和聚餐这两项占比较高的原因，内容切题

原文：The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the expenditure of the Spring Festival among residents in a certain city in China. New Year"s gift takes the lead at 40%. Additionally, factors such as transportation, meeting and eating, and others are also considered, accounting for 20%, 20%, and 20%, respectively.

批改：对图表的描述很全面，注意语法问题

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of the residents in China, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：表达个人观点，语言流畅

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

题目要求：对图表信息描绘全面准确，个人观点及论述内容符合题意；

语言表达：全文用了较多经典句式，但也有少量语法错误。练习阶段也可以尝试用自己的语言表达，多锻炼下语法能力；

行文逻辑：第一段描述题干内容，第二段分析原因，第三段表达个人观点，架构完整；

修改建议：改正原文错误；继续多多积累经典句式；加强语法练习；

整体来说还不错，继续保持~

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