2015年考研英语二大作文实例分析与批改

备战2015年考研英语大作文，先从研读经典高分范文开始。本文汇集的启航教育批改范文中，不仅有原文、批注，还有词汇注释与亮点解析。准备2027考研的同学，可联系启航教育在线咨询考研英语二写作高分规划。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of different expenditure during the Spring Festival for citizens in a certain city in China. New Year presents take the lead at 40%, followed by transportation, gathering and dining, and other expenses at 20% each.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conducter orchestrating the symphony of changes. our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford New Year presents that were previously deemed lexury items. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamnic development, the younger geveration, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic appliances and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of the younger ganeration. serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：conducter

批改：拼写错误，conductor

批改：这里应该是逗号

原文：lexury

批改：拼写错误，luxury

原文：dynamnic

批改：拼写错误 dynamic

原文：geveration

批改：拼写错误 generation

原文：domestic appliances

批改：domestic appliances意思是家用电器，与题目说的春节消费无关

原文：ganeration

批改：拼写错误，generation

原文： will likely stable

批改：stable是形容词，不能直接作谓语，前面需要加上系动词remain或be

原文：Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

批改：原因这段除了上面说的家用电器的脱题外，其他内容上没啥问题

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of different expenditure during the Spring Festival for citizens in a certain city in China. New Year presents take the lead at 40%, followed by transportation, gathering and dining, and other expenses at 20% each.

批改：图表描述都没问题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：8/15

题目要求：文章基本完成。第一段对图表数据进行了描述，第二段尝试分析原因，结尾进行预测。涵盖了题目要求的两大部分。

语言表达：文章中存在拼写错误和基础语法错误需要格外注意。

行文逻辑：文章按照描述图表、分析原因、预测未来的顺序展开，结构清晰。从描述图表到分析原因，再到预测未来，文章中的过渡较为自然。

建议：建议同学写作完成后，一定要通篇读一遍，这个过程重点抓语法和拼写错误，这种不必要的问题一定要扼杀掉。另外坚持背诵锦囊句，多练习积累手感和语感，一定要坚持自己写作文，自己写完之后再去借鉴范文，学习范文的优秀表达，这样会更快提升，能在正式考试中根据不同的题目要求写出更切题的文章。继续加油(ง •_•)ง，相信你一定能成功，Go Go!

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