2014年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

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The pie chart clearly dipicts the change of urban population and rural population in China during twenty years. In 1990, the number of urban people was 300 million. But by 2010, the figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural people experienced a slow decline of 160 million.

The core reason of the observed phenomenton can be summarized as followed.

First and foremost, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony changes, our government has made a tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system, erabling rural people to have ample opportunities to work in urban. What is more, as the saying goes, `On life"s stage, pressure is always present. "Nowadays, rural presidents are compelled to confront a heavy life pressure, as a result, working in city has emerged a significant choice of them.

What about future trend? I am confident that the urban people will continue to rise in the followin decades. In contrast, the number of rural people will likely continue to decrease.

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三、考研英语作文批改

原文：dipicts

批改：depicts

原文：The pie chart clearly dipicts the change of urban population and rural population in China during twenty years. In 1990, the number of urban people was 300 million. But by 2010, the figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural people experienced a slow decline of 160 million.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：followed

批改：follows

原文： a

批改：删除

原文：erabling

批改：enabling

原文：presidents

批改：residents

原文：emerged

批改：emerged as

原文：the

批改：the number of

原文： followin

批改： following

原文：The core reason of the observed phenomenton can be summarized as followed. First and foremost, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony changes, our government has made a tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system, erabling rural people to have ample opportunities to work in urban. What is more, as the saying goes, `On life"s stage, pressure is always present. "Nowadays, rural presidents are compelled to confront a heavy life pressure, as a result, working in city has emerged a significant choice of them.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：What about future trend? I am confident that the urban people will continue to rise in the followin decades. In contrast, the number of rural people will likely continue to decrease.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11 /15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：首段简洁描述图表核心数据，突出城乡人口变化趋势。中间段分析变化原因，包括经济发展、城市基础设施优势等，同时指出城市化带来的问题。尾段提出政府应采取措施缓解城市化负面影响，体现对社会问题的关注。

整体来看，语言表达和语法基础上，进步的空间还很大。比如本次作文中出现多次的单词拼写错误等问题，会很拉低你的平均分。另外还需要注意一些基础的语法问题和表达搭配问题，有时间好好看看文中的批改，细心吸收，争取在接下来的练习中避免类似的错误。

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