2014年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

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一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The chart records the changes about the population of the city and the rural in China during 20 years.

The chart records the changes about the population of the city and the rural in China from 1990 to 2010.Specifically，the number of city population had been on a rise，which soared from 300 millions to 666 millions.In the meantime，the number of rural population experienced a decrease ,from 834 million to 674 millions.

In my views, what is reflected in the chart can be contributed to a host of factors, among two are analyzed as follows.In the first place, economic advancement has to some extent contributed to this phenomenon.Unlike their previous generations, people in modern times who don"t have to concerned about the basic living needs, enjoy better living standards and can therefore migrate to city from countryside.Secondly, the changes benefits personal development.For example, it enables children to widen their horizons of knowledge and build up self–confidence.

Based on what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that the phenomenon will continue to gather momentum in the coming years and exert a far–reaching impact on the economy as well as the whole society.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：hanges about th

批改：“changes about” 搭配不当，应改为 “changes in”。

原文：e number of city population

批改：“the number of city population” 是典型错误，应直接使用 “the urban population” 作主语。

原文：74 millio

批改：数据单位 “millions” 使用错误。在英语中，当有具体数字时，使用单数 “million”，即 “300 million”, “666 million”。但 “from 834 million to 674 millions” 出现了前后不一致。

原文：art records the changes about the population of the city and the rural in China during 20 years. The chart records the changes about the population of the city and the rural in China from 1990 to 2010.Specifically，the number of city population had been on a rise，which soared from 300 millions to 666 millions.In the meantime，the number of rural population experienced a decrease ,from 834 million to 674 millio

批改：时态问题：“had been on a rise” 使用过去完成时是不必要的，简单过去时 “rose” 或 “saw a rise” 即可。

原文：art records the changes about the population of the city and the rural in China during 20 years. The chart records the changes about the population of the city and the rural in China from 1990 to 2010.Specifically，the number of city population had been on a rise，which soared from 300 millions to 666 millions.In the meantime，the number of rural population experienced a decrease ,from 834 million to 674 millions.

批改：图表描述段的核心信息都抓对了，这是基础

原文： views,

批改：“In my views” 应为 “In my view”。

原文：t can be contributed

批改：“can be contributed to” 应改为 “can be attributed to”（归因于）。“contribute to”是“导致”，主语是原因。

原文：on"t have to conce

批改：“don"t have to concerned about” 语法错误，应为 “don"t have to be concerned about” 或 “don"t have to concern themselves with”。

原文：he changes ben

批改：“the changes benefits” 主谓不一致，应为 “the changes benefit”。

原文： my views, what is reflected in the chart can be contributed to a host of factors, among two are analyzed as follows.In the first place, economic advancement has to some extent contributed to this phenomenon.Unlike their previous generations, people in modern times who don"t have to concerned about the basic living needs, enjoy better living standards and can therefore migrate to city from countryside.Secondly, the changes benefits personal development.For example, it enables children to widen their horizons of knowledge and build up self–confidence.

批改：第一个原因（经济发展）是相关且正确的。但第二个原因（利于个人发展，特别是儿童增长自信）论证逻辑存在偏差。图表反映的是宏观的人口迁移，而“儿童增长自信”是一个非常个人化、微观的结果，无法直接解释为什么数百万人口会从乡村迁往城市。论证没有切中要害。

原文：d on what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that the phenomenon will continue to gather momentum in the coming years and exert a far–reaching impact on the economy as well as the whole society.

批改：结尾段语言出色

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10分

优点：结构完整，使用了部分高级词汇和句式。

主要失分点：

内容逻辑：第二段的原因分析出现偏差，未能有效阐述核心要点。

语法与词汇：第一段存在多处语法和搭配错误，影响了表达的准确性。

总评与修改建议：

给你两个最核心的建议：

务必记住这个公式：数字 + million + 名词。比如 300 million people。在草稿纸上专门练习几次，形成肌肉记忆。

分析原因时，要问自己：这个理由能直接解释图表现象吗？

有偏差的论证：城市化帮助儿童建立自信。（太微观，不直接）

精准的论证：城市提供了更丰富的就业机会、更优质的教育和医疗资源、更现代的生活方式，这些才是吸引乡村人口迁移的直接动力。

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