2011年考研英语二大作文怎么写？附例文批改

正在备考考研英语的你，是否还在为2011年考研英语二大作文的写法犯愁？本文精选一篇高分组同学的批改例文，系统梳理考研英语作文话题的常考话题与写作框架。透过启航教育老师的逐段点评，你能直观感受高分作文的得分诀窍。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the market percenitage of some car brands in China from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic cars was approximately 25%, but by 2009, proportion this rate had risen to 30%.In contrast, the proporton of Japanese cars experienced a significant decline of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s car industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsuprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic cars will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars and American cars will continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：percenitage

批改：percentage​​

原文：proportion

批改：删除

原文：proporton

批改：proportion

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the market percenitage of some car brands in China from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic cars was approximately 25%, but by 2009, proportion this rate had risen to 30%.In contrast, the proporton of Japanese cars experienced a significant decline of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

批改：描述准确，注意拼写

原文：unsuprising

批改：unsurprising

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s car industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsuprising.

批改：论据充分，语法结构丰富

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic cars will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars and American cars will continue to decrease.

批改：good，回扣主题，预测趋势

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，拼写错误是扣分原因；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，插入语，非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

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