2011年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of market shares of certain brands in domestic car market in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic cars was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had significantly risen to around 33%. In contrast, the percentage of American cars experienced a substantial decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously the percentage of Japanese cars remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in response to these changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generations, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars rather than foreign cars. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic cars will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of American and Japanese cars will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of market shares of certain brands in domestic car market in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic cars was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had significantly risen to around 33%. In contrast, the percentage of American cars experienced a substantial decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously the percentage of Japanese cars remained stable and steady.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：undergoing

批改：is undergoing 补充be动词

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in response to these changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generations, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars rather than foreign cars. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic cars will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of American and Japanese cars will likely continue to decrease.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：在第二段分析原因时，我们可以有两个选择，一是只分析中国品牌占比上升的原因，二是可以加上日本品牌占比下降的原因，关于日本品牌占比下降的原因，可以写日本品牌一些不当行为导致其声誉下降，进而影响其销量等原因。

整体来看，主要是细节错误，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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