2011年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

本文将启航教育一对一批改过的2011年考研英语二高分范文进行公开呈现。批改老师对文中每一个失分细节进行了精确标注，对照考研英语作文批改热点话题与评分细则，你可以快速了解考研英语写作的提分方向。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart depicted the Chinese s car market different tax in 2008 and 2009. The percentage of Made in China was around 26%. In 2008, but by 2009, this rate was increased to 30%. In contrast, the percentage of Made in Reben was around 35%, but by 2009, this rate was decreased to 25%. Meanwhile, the percentage of Made in American remain stable and steady.

The core reason for this observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. First and foremost, the goverment has made hugh efforts to advance the Reform and Opening-up Policy. Furthermore, the useful and cheap are the most factors people are looking for. What"s more, People, particularly born in 2000s and 2010s, are accustomed to using appliances by made in China and have become the major consumers group. Considering these factors, the phenomenon in the chart is normal.

What about future trend? I am confident that the percentage of Made in China will increase in the following decade. In contrast, the percentage of Made in American remain stable and steady.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：depicted

批改：depicts现在时即可

原文：Chinese s car market different tax

批改：改成：different car brands in Chinese car market

原文：Made in China

批改：国产汽车可以表示为：domestic cars

批改：句号去掉

原文： In

批改：in小写

原文：was

批改：改成had

原文：Made in Rebe

批改：Japanese cars

原文：was

批改：had

原文：Made in American

批改：American cars

原文：remain

批改：过去时remained

原文：The bar chart depicted the Chinese s car market different tax in 2008 and 2009. The percentage of Made in China was around 26%. In 2008, but by 2009, this rate was increased to 30%. In contrast, the percentage of Made in Reben was around 35%, but by 2009, this rate was decreased to 25%. Meanwhile, the percentage of Made in American remain stable and steady.

批改：能够清晰的描绘图表中展现的内容，内容完整，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：reason

批改：reasons复数

原文：hugh

批改：huge

批改：加上cars

原文：People

批改：p小写

批改：加those

原文：appliances

批改：cars说的是汽车的是，不是家用电器

原文：by

批改：by去掉

原文：The core reason for this observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. First and foremost, the goverment has made hugh efforts to advance the Reform and Opening-up Policy. Furthermore, the useful and cheap are the most factors people are looking for. What"s more, People, particularly born in 2000s and 2010s, are accustomed to using appliances by made in China and have become the major consumers group. Considering these factors, the phenomenon in the chart is normal.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，注意避免语言错误。

原文：trend

批改：复数trends

原文：Made in China

批改：domestic cars或Chinese cars

原文：Made in American

批改：American cars

原文：remain

批改：前加will

原文：What about future trend? I am confident that the percentage of Made in China will increase in the following decade. In contrast, the percentage of Made in American remain stable and steady.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：7/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，名词单复数要使用正确，注意单词的选取要符合题目主题的要求；句式和语法方面，要注意时态的正确选取。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：内容比较充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。但是一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节错误。再接再厉。

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