2011年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2011年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in market

shares of certain brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 30%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a rapidly decline about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously the percentage of American brands remained stablevand steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound automotive industry system, enabling drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace. In addition, with the high-speed development of society, people"s attitudes towards consumption have changed thoroughly. We are accustomed to using domestic manufacture. In

my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.

I am confident that the proportion of domestic brands will steadily increase in the following decades. Meanwhile, the number of other countries" brands will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：rapidly

批改：改成形容词修饰后面的名词decline

原文：stablev

批改：stable

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in market shares of certain brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 30%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a rapidly decline about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously the percentage of American brands remained stablevand steady.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：enabling drive

批改：enable多余，改成driving

原文：elevate

批改：elevating

原文：manufacture

批改：不是制造业，而是国产品牌，改成brand

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound automotive industry system, enabling drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace. In addition, with the high-speed development of society, people"s attitudes towards consumption have changed thoroughly. We are accustomed to using domestic manufacture. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：I am confident that the proportion of domestic brands will steadily increase in the following decades. Meanwhile, the number of other countries" brands will likely continue to decrease

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，还要注意词性之间的修饰关系；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要避免句子结构的冗余；

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免小的语法错误和拼写错误。再接再厉。

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