2011年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

作为考研英语备考的核心模块，2011年考研英语二大作文承载了大量学生的提分期待。本文带来的这篇批改例文，紧扣考研英语二作文真题常见话题，由启航教育资深英语教研团队逐句批改，详细标注语法、词汇与逻辑三大失分点，是考研英语写作提分的优质资料。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depits the market share of certain brands in the domestic car market in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was approximately 26%, but by 2009, the rate had substantially risen to around 32%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor of orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound car industrysystem, enabling domestic brands to have ample opportunies for the capture of market share. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes. challenges, and chances, supporting domestic brands is indispensable if we wen wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsuprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brands is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand will likely continue to decrease and that of American brand will remain relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：depits

批改：depicts

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确

原文：American

批改：此处要表达完整，改为 American brands

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

原文：industrysystem

批改：两个单词之间加空格

批改：逗号

批改：内容表达不错，也很具体

批改：语法正确

原文：brand

批改：可数名词单数形式不能单独存在，改为 brands

原文： brand

批改：可数名词单数形式不能单独存在，改为 brands

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

原文：opportunies

批改：opportunities

原文：for the capture of

批改：改为 to compete for 更地道

原文：wen

批改：删去

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2.拼写要细心。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，试着多用自己的话来写，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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