2013年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2013年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2013年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the change of taking part-time jobs among students at a certain university. In freshman, the percentage of part-time jobs was 67.77%, but by junior, this rate had gradually risen to 71.95%. Meanwhile, the proportion of part-time jobs experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from junior to senior.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the tremendous symphony of changes, our government has made efforts to make policies, enabling students to have ample opportunities for taking part-time jobs. In addition, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and as a result, taking part-time jobs has emerged as their significant choice for their leisure time. Considering these factors, the depicted phemomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of taking part-time jobs will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：freshman

批改：后加year

批改：加taking

原文：junior

批改：后加year

批改：加taking

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the change of taking part-time jobs among students at a certain university. In freshman, the percentage of part-time jobs was 67.77%, but by junior, this rate had gradually risen to 71.95%. Meanwhile, the proportion of part-time jobs experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from junior to senior.

批改：能够清晰的描绘图表中展现的内容，内容完整，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the tremendous symphony of changes, our government has made efforts to make policies, enabling students to have ample opportunities for taking part-time jobs. In addition, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and as a result, taking part-time jobs has emerged as their significant choice for their leisure time. Considering these factors, the depicted phemomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of taking part-time jobs will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇掌握的较好；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子成分的完整；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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