考研英语一2023年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

本文将启航教育一对一批改过的2023年考研英语一高分范文进行公开呈现。批改老师对文中每一个失分细节进行了精确标注，对照考研英语写作模板热点话题与评分细则，你可以快速了解考研英语写作的提分方向。

一、考研英语一2023年大作文题目

考研英语一2023年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay based on the picture below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture briefly, 2) interpret the implied meaning, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2023年大作文批改例文

As depicted in the picture, there are two dragon-boats running in the river, appreciated by a crowd of people on the bridge. Meanwhile two elderly people are sincerely delighted by the view because the dragon-boat races become more. and more popular and addicting in their village.

Obviously, the meaning that the cartoonist wants to convey. to us is that Chinese traditional culture is acquiring growing attention paid by plenty of people, who have intense interest in traditional culture and are capable of capturing its beauty exactly.

From my perspective, the phenomenon is of great benefit to diverse aspects of our society and life. To start with, by participating in the traditional culture activities, we can not only obtain knowledge of Chinese culture but also absorb the intelligence hidden in the culture. What"s more, we"d better raise awareness of protecting and promoting our traditional culture so that it can bring vitality and vigor. Only by doing so can we develop our individual qualities and better inherit traditional culture.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：addicting

批改：吸引人的可以用appealing

原文：As depicted in the picture, there are two dragon-boats running in the river, appreciated by a crowd of people on the bridge. Meanwhile two elderly people are sincerely delighted by the view because the dragon-boat races become more. and more popular and addicting in their village.

批改：对漫画内容描述的很全面，语言连贯。

原文：Obviously, the meaning that the cartoonist wants to convey. to us is that Chinese traditional culture is acquiring growing attention paid by plenty of people, who have intense interest in traditional culture and are capable of capturing its beauty exactly.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。

原文：From my perspective, the phenomenon is of great benefit to diverse aspects of our society and life. To start with, by participating in the traditional culture activities, we can not only obtain knowledge of Chinese culture but also absorb the intelligence hidden in the culture. What"s more, we"d better raise awareness of protecting and promoting our traditional culture so that it can bring vitality and vigor. Only by doing so can we develop our individual qualities and better inherit traditional culture.

批改：能够提出自己的建议，起到了总结和再次呼应主题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意恰当选词；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础很好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬，继续加油。

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