考研英语一2010年大作文实例分析与批改

备战2010年考研英语大作文，先从研读经典高分范文开始。本文汇集的启航教育批改范文中，不仅有原文、批注，还有词汇注释与亮点解析。准备2027考研的同学，可联系启航教育在线咨询考研英语一写作高分规划。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the picture, there is a boiling "cultural hotpot", which brings together diverse Chinese and Western cultures such as Buddhism, benevolence and Shakespeare. Evidently, the picture intends to convey to readers that the integration of Chinese and Western cultures can provide rich and beneficial nourishment.

​ Cultural integration is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, in modern society full of changes, chances and challenges, cultural integration has become a key to whether a culture can be more effectively transmitted and preserved. On the other hand, cultural integration holds exceptional significance for a nation, because it serves as a vital means to sustain a nation"s developmental vitality, enhance its cultural soft power, and enrich its cultural substance, further promoting the prosperity of social culture and diversifying the cultural lives of people.

In brief, cultural integration is the catalyst for societal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：As shown in the picture, there is a boiling "cultural hotpot", which brings together diverse Chinese and Western cultures such as Buddhism, benevolence and Shakespeare. Evidently, the picture intends to convey to readers that the integration of Chinese and Western cultures can provide rich and beneficial nourishment.

批改：对图画内容描述的很全面，且能够清晰点明主题。

原文：Cultural integration is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, in modern society full of changes, chances and challenges, cultural integration has become a key to whether a culture can be more effectively transmitted and preserved. On the other hand, cultural integration holds exceptional significance for a nation, because it serves as a vital means to sustain a nation"s developmental vitality, enhance its cultural soft power, and enrich its cultural substance, further promoting the prosperity of social culture and diversifying the cultural lives of people.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：In brief, cultural integration is the catalyst for societal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance

批改：该段再次总结强调写作的中心，起到了点题的作用。言简意赅，无语言错误。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20

内容切题，准确全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础较好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬，继续加油。

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