考研英语一2023年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

启航教育作为考研英语培训领域的知名品牌，每年都会整理发布当年的考研英语作文模板高分范文。本文呈现的2023年考研英语一大作文批改例文中，每一处失分点都已被老师精准订正，是2027考生不可错过的写作资料。

一、考研英语一2023年大作文题目

考研英语一2023年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay based on the picture below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture briefly, 2) interpret the implied meaning, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2023年大作文批改例文

As shown in the picture, there is a crowd of people, acclaiming and watching the dragon boat race. While an old woman says, "How great it is!Our village"s dragon boat race is increasingly thriving." Evidently,the picture intends to convey to readers that it is the development of the traditional culture that plays an important and positive role in our personal lives and in society.

The phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways,but two of them are particularly significant.On the one hand, while certain Chinese traditions may be outdated,the development of the traditional culture is one that should never lose its luster,as it is an essential bond that keeps the chinese nation thriving. On the other hand, the development of excellent traditional culture can nurture our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment,thus making life rewarding and meaningful,rather than being self-consuming.

In brief,the development of the traditional culture is the catalyst for our societal and personal development,from which we all stand to benefit.Therefore,we should actively support and advocate this practice and we should actively promote and carry forward traditional culture. Only by doing so can we create a happier life ,,build a more harmonious society and make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：As shown in the picture, there is a crowd of people, acclaiming and watching the dragon boat race. While an old woman says, "How great it is!Our village"s dragon boat race is increasingly thriving." Evidently,the picture intends to convey to readers that it is the development of the traditional culture that plays an important and positive role in our personal lives and in society.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

原文：chinese

批改：Chinese首字母大写

原文：The phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways,but two of them are particularly significant.On the one hand, while certain Chinese traditions may be outdated,the development of the traditional culture is one that should never lose its luster,as it is an essential bond that keeps the chinese nation thriving. On the other hand, the development of excellent traditional culture can nurture our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment,thus making life rewarding and meaningful,rather than being self-consuming.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：In brief,the development of the traditional culture is the catalyst for our societal and personal development,from which we all stand to benefit.Therefore,we should actively support and advocate this practice and we should actively promote and carry forward traditional culture. Only by doing so can we create a happier life ,,build a more harmonious society and make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

批改：能够提出自己的建议，起到了总结和再次呼应主题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20

内容切题，准确全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意国家名作为专有名词首字母要大写；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础较好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬，继续加油。

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