考研英语二2016年大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二真题每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2016年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、考研英语二2016年大作文题目

考研英语二2016年大作文Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、考研英语二2016年大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the purposes of traveling among students at a certain university. Appreciating landscape takes the lead at 37%, followed by relieving stress at 33%. Additionally, factors such as making friends,developing independence, and other purposes are also considered, accounting for 9%,6% and 15%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present.” Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense academic pressure, and as a result, traveling has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a beautiful environment system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for appreciating landscape through traveling. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the dbove statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of university students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：dbove

批改：拼写错误，above

原文：The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the purposes of traveling among students at a certain university. Appreciating landscape takes the lead at 37%, followed by relieving stress at 33%. Additionally, factors such as making friends,developing independence, and other purposes are also considered, accounting for 9%,6% and 15%, respectively.

批改：描述图表内容，符合题目要求

原文：he core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present.” Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense academic pressure, and as a result, traveling has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a beautiful environment system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for appreciating landscape through traveling. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：使用了表示逻辑关系的连接词，并且提出了自己的观点，条理清晰

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the dbove statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of university students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：结尾段预测未来的发展趋势，符合最后一段的内容设置

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13

这篇图表分析文围绕 “某大学学生旅行目的占比” 展开，能清晰传递 “观景、减压为主要旅行目的” 的核心信息，整体逻辑清晰。语法和语言表达上几乎没有什么问题，完成度较好。考试的时候写完可以整体检查一下，避免出现细节问题，希望继续努力，加油！

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