2014年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

当你坐在考研英语二考场，面对2014年大作文题目的那一瞬间，是否能快速组织起一篇结构清晰、表达地道的高分文章？本文这篇批改例文，正是考研英语二作文范文话题下的标准范本，适合每一位考研英语备考生反复研读。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

In the bar chart lies the quantity variation of over the urban and rural generation over the two decades between 1990 and 2010 in China.

Regarding the breakdown, total generation slowly growing, the urban generation steadily increased from 300 million in 1990 to 666 million in 2010, while the urban generation slid down from 834 million to 674 million. It can be naturally inferred that rural people kept flowing into the cities in the two decades, which manifests the phenomenon of urbanization. The statistics, however, still reveals a considerable proportion of the rural population. In order to keep up with the footstep of global development, the process of urbanization and modernization remains indispensable.

To summarize, urbanization in China is far from the end. The trend will assist advancing modernization, improving the quality of life of each individual.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：over

批改：去掉

原文：generation

批改：改成population人口

原文：In the bar chart lies the quantity variation of over the urban and rural generation over the two decades between 1990 and 2010 in China.

批改：要注意用词的准确性

原文：generation

批改：population

原文：the

批改：前加and

原文：generation

批改：population

原文：generation

批改：

原文：reveals

批改：statistics是复数，改成reveal

批改：前加percentage

原文：Regarding the breakdown, total generation slowly growing, the urban generation steadily increased from 300 million in 1990 to 666 million in 2010, while the urban generation slid down from 834 million to 674 million. It can be naturally inferred that rural people kept flowing into the cities in the two decades, which manifests the phenomenon of urbanization. The statistics, however, still reveals a considerable proportion of the rural population. In order to keep up with the footstep of global development, the process of urbanization and modernization remains indispensable.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：To summarize, urbanization in China is far from the end. The trend will assist advancing modernization, improving the quality of life of each individual.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行分析总结，起到了点题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式和语法方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意主谓一致。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。如能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，会更符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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