2013年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2013年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二大作文教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2013年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2013年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in part-time job situations among college students at a certain university. In the freshman year, the percentage of studens taking part-time jobs was 67.77%, but by the junior year, this rate had gradually risen to 71.93%. In contrast, the proportion of students doing part- time jobs experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from the junior year to the senior year.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are eager to improve their working ability through part- time jobs. In addition, An increasing number of young people believe that in morden society full of changes, challenges, and chances, improving working ability through part- time jobs is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.

What about future trends? I am confident that the propotion of university students taking part- time jobs will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in part-time job situations among college students at a certain university. In the freshman year, the percentage of studens taking part-time jobs was 67.77%, but by the junior year, this rate had gradually risen to 71.93%. In contrast, the proportion of students doing part- time jobs experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from the junior year to the senior year.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：Against

批改：逗号后单词首字母小写

原文：An

批改：小写

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are eager to improve their working ability through part- time jobs. In addition, An increasing number of young people believe that in morden society full of changes, challenges, and chances, improving working ability through part- time jobs is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the propotion of university students taking part- time jobs will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，逗号后的单词首字母小写；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。

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