2011年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

启航教育在考研英语写作教学中反复强调：词汇与句式的高级化是考研英语作文高分的关键。本文整理的2011年考研英语二批改范例，几乎每一段都包含高分替换词与衔接词，是考研英语二大作文写作锦囊中的代表性范文。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

This table orderly arranges the information of some brands in the domestic car market in 2008 and 2009 Market share，displaying that the number of domestic brand cars is gradually increasing, by about 10%, while the number of Japanese brand cars is gradually decreasing，and the number of American brand cars remains basically balanced.It is a striking morning call to send us a significant message that the development of domestically produced automobiles has been in the spotlight in current society.

Among the topic concerning the development of domestically produced automobiles，as the chart shows，the most cardinal tip is related to the issue of the development of China"s automobile industry. To begin with，with the continuous development of science and technology in China, the automotive industry has made great progress, and people are increasingly willing to support domestic automobile brands，Apart from that，the service provided by domestic automobiles is also getting better and better, making after-sales services more convenient for people.

Considering these general illustrations，we may reasonably arrive at a conclusion that the increase in the number of domestic automobile brands is inevitable，and it can be predicted that they will become more and more, not only in China but also internationally.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：This table orderly arranges the information of some brands in the domestic car market in 2008 and 2009 Market share，displaying that the number of domestic brand cars is gradually increasing, by about 10%, while the number of Japanese brand cars is gradually decreasing，and the number of American brand cars remains basically balanced.It is a striking morning call to send us a significant message that the development of domestically produced automobiles has been in the spotlight in current society.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：，

批改：句号结束一句话

原文：Among the topic concerning the development of domestically produced automobiles，as the chart shows，the most cardinal tip is related to the issue of the development of China"s automobile industry. To begin with，with the continuous development of science and technology in China, the automotive industry has made great progress, and people are increasingly willing to support domestic automobile brands，Apart from that，the service provided by domestic automobiles is also getting better and better, making after-sales services more convenient for people.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：Considering these general illustrations，we may reasonably arrive at a conclusion that the increase in the number of domestic automobile brands is inevitable，and it can be predicted that they will become more and more, not only in China but also internationally.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行分析总结，起到了点题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意正确使用标点断句；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬

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