2011年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

当你坐在考研英语二考场，面对2011年大作文题目的那一瞬间，是否能快速组织起一篇结构清晰、表达地道的高分文章？本文这篇批改例文，正是考研英语二作文真题话题下的标准范本，适合每一位考研英语备考生反复研读。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The table depicts the market share of partly car brands in China from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was 25%, but by 2009, the rate had substantially risen to 33%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a signification decline of 10% during the same period. Stimultaneous, the percentage of Amrican brands remained stable and steady.

The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive enconomic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford automobiles that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic automobiles and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic automobiles will steady increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of foreign brands will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：partly

批改：partly是 副词，这里可以改为some

原文：signification

批改：要用形容词 significant

原文：Stimultaneous

批改：Simultaneously

原文：Amrican

批改：American

原文：The table depicts the market share of partly car brands in China from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was 25%, but by 2009, the rate had substantially risen to 33%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a signification decline of 10% during the same period. Stimultaneous, the percentage of Amrican brands remained stable and steady.

批改：对图表的描述 较为全面，注意单词词性和拼写

原文：reason

批改：要用复数reasons

原文：enconomic

批改：economic

原文：steady

批改：要用副词 steadily

原文：relatively stable

批改：与前面decrease矛盾，应删除

原文：The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive enconomic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford automobiles that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic automobiles and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

批改：从政府变革和消费群体两方面分析 国产汽车品牌占比上升的原因，注意个别语法问题

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic automobiles will steady increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of foreign brands will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

批改：表达个人观点，注意语义的清晰性

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

题目要求：对图表内容描述全面，个人观点及论述内容符合题意；

语言表达：全文用了较多的经典句式，但也有个别语法错误和拼写错误也较多。如果目前还不能准确使用例句，也可以尝试用自己的语言表达，锻炼下语法水平；

行文逻辑：第一段描述题干内容，第二段详细论述，第三段表达观点，架构完整；

修改建议：改正原文错误；继续积累经典句式；注意单词的词性；

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