2014年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

This bar chart clearly depicts the changes of population among Chinese urban and rural. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford urban houses that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly thoes born in the 1990s, are accustomed to buying urban houses and have become the primary group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

what about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：urban and rural

批改：urban and rural areas

原文：This bar chart clearly depicts the changes of population among Chinese urban and rural. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：thoes

批改：those

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford urban houses that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly thoes born in the 1990s, are accustomed to buying urban houses and have become the primary group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：what about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

原文：what

批改：首字母大写

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13 /15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：首段简洁描述图表核心数据，突出城乡人口变化趋势。中间段分析变化原因，包括经济发展、城市基础设施优势等，同时指出城市化带来的问题。尾段提出政府应采取措施缓解城市化负面影响，体现对社会问题的关注。

整体来看，主要是细节错误，但要多用自己的语言去进行表达，避免和范文重复，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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