2014年考研英语二大作文失分点批改

本文整理了2014年考研英语二大作文真题原文及高分批改例文，是备考考研英语作文真题范文的实用素材。考研英语作文在考研英语中占据重要分值，历年真题范文能够帮助考生快速把握命题规律与评分要点，下面让我们一同走进这篇批改范文。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts change of population in China city and rural between 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of city population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 milion. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced significant decline of 160 milion during the same period.

The core reasons for the obseverd phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our goverment has made tremendous offorts to build a sound employment system, enabling people to have ample opportunities for find works . In an addition, against the backdorp of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the young people in rural, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to living in city and have become the primary group.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of city population will steadily increase in the following decades In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： change of population in China city and rural between 1990 to 2010

批改：the changes in urban and rural populations in China over a period of 20 years

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts change of population in China city and rural between 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of city population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 milion. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced significant decline of 160 milion during the same period.

批改：准确描述了图表内容

原文：obseverd

批改：observed

原文：offorts

批改：efforts

原文：works

批改：work/ jobs in cities， 点明是在城市里工作更多

原文： backdorp

批改：backdrop

原文： goverment

批改：government

原文：rural

批改：rural areas

原文：The core reasons for the obseverd phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our goverment has made tremendous offorts to build a sound employment system, enabling people to have ample opportunities for find works . In an addition, against the backdorp of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the young people in rural, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to living in city and have become the primary group.

批改：信息要点清晰，注意拼写错误

原文：to

批改：and

原文：decades

批改：后面加逗号

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of city population will steadily increase in the following decades In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：概括趋势，呼应主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15分。

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