2021年考研英语一大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2021年考研英语一大作文题目

考研英语一2021年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should1)describe the picture briefly, 2)interpret the implied meaning, and 3)give your comments. Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、2021年考研英语一大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there is a boy, it speaking to his father,“Dad, many classmates think that learning opera is boring”,while his father encourages him to stick to his hobby. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is sticking to oneself that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, in modern society full of changes, changes and challenges, perseverance has become a key quality that distinguishes exceptional individuals from ordinary people, and its significance has become increasingly evident. What is more, perseverance can nature our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful.

In brief, perseverance is the catalyst for social and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality. Only by doing so can we develop fulfill our aspirations.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：it

批改：去掉

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there is a boy, it speaking to his father,“Dad, many classmates think that learning opera is boring”,while his father encourages him to stick to his hobby. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is sticking to oneself that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

原文：changes

批改：chances

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, in modern society full of changes, changes and challenges, perseverance has become a key quality that distinguishes exceptional individuals from ordinary people, and its significance has become increasingly evident. What is more, perseverance can nature our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：develop

批改：develop去掉

原文：In brief, perseverance is the catalyst for social and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality. Only by doing so can we develop fulfill our aspirations.

批改：起到了呼吁和号召的作用，紧扣主题，语言连贯完整。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17/20

内容切题，准确全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免单词重复，如两个changes；句式方面，注意句子结构的准确，避免多余成分；语法方面，语法基础较好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节问题会更好。继续加油。

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