2014年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes between countryside"s population and city"s population in China over 20 years. In 1990, the nember of city"s populations was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to666 million.In contrast, the number of countryside"s experienced a significant decline of 180million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, a increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances,working in the city is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.Inaddition,Chinese society is undergoing an extersive and profound transformation.In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by contribution of big city in responding to these changes.Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of city"s population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the hu mber of Country"s number will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：countryside"s

批改：用rural更恰当

原文：city"s

批改：用urban更恰当

原文：nember of

批改：population本身有“人口数量”的意思，这里应删除

原文：number of

批改：同前文，应删除

原文：number of

批改：同前文，应删除

原文：city"s

批改：urban

原文： to

批改：后加空格

原文：countryside"s

批改：rural population

原文：180

批改：后加空格

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes between countryside"s population and city"s population in China over 20 years. In 1990, the nember of city"s populations was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to666 million.In contrast, the number of countryside"s experienced a significant decline of 180million during the same period.

批改：描述了图表 内容，注意用词的恰当性和词语的搭配

原文：a

批改：an

原文：In

批改：后加空格

原文：extersive

批改：extensive

原文：contribution

批改：要用复数形式 the contributions

原文：city

批改：要用复数cities

原文：city"s

批改：urban

原文： the hu mber of Country"s number

批改：表意模糊，可改为the rural population

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, a increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances,working in the city is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.Inaddition,Chinese society is undergoing an extersive and profound transformation.In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by contribution of big city in responding to these changes.Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：从年轻人诉求和社会变革两方面分析城镇人口越来越多的原因，注意个别语法问题

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of city"s population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the hu mber of Country"s number will likely continue to decrease.

批改：表达个人观点，注意语言表达的清晰性

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：8/15

题目要求：对图表内容描述全面，一些用词可以再优化下；个人观点及论述内容符合题意；

语言表达：全文用了较多经典句式，但也有一些语法错误和拼写错误，导致内容表达上不够流畅清晰。如果目前还不能准确使用例句，也可以尝试用自己的语言表达，锻炼下语法水平；

行文逻辑：第一段描述题干内容，第二段给出详细分析，第三段表达个人观点，架构完整；

修改建议：改正原文错误；继续积累经典句式；加强语法练习；提高拼写的准确性；

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