2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

2014年考研英语二大作文属于典型的图表作文，要求考生准确描述数据变化并深入解读现象。本文精解的这篇柱状图批改范例，完整覆盖考研英语二真题常考图表的描述思路，是考研英语图表类作文的标杆范例。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the change of Chinese Urban population and rural population from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of Urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to around 674 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline of about 168 million from 2000 to 2010. but the number of rural population remained stable and steady from 1990 to 2000. The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people"s attitudes towards living have undergone significant changes; people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of people choose the city rather than the countryside. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, prefer to live in a convenient city. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising. What about future trends?I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：168

批改：160

原文：2000

批改：1990

原文：but the number of rural population remained stable and steady from 1990 to 2000.

批改：这句多余删去

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the change of Chinese Urban population and rural population from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of Urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to around 674 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline of about 168 million from 2000 to 2010. but the number of rural population remained stable and steady from 1990 to 2000.

批改：描述图表信息时要注意准确性

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people"s attitudes towards living have undergone significant changes; people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of people choose the city rather than the countryside. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, prefer to live in a convenient city. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising. What about future trends?I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础较好。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意图表信息的准确描述。

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