2011年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

本文将启航教育一对一批改过的2011年考研英语二高分范文进行公开呈现。批改老师对文中每一个失分细节进行了精确标注，对照考研英语写作模板热点话题与评分细则，你可以快速了解考研英语写作的提分方向。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The line chart clearly depicts the proportion of certain brands of domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substaintially risen to 33%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a significant decline of 10% during the same period2008 to 2009. Simultaneously,the perentage of American brands remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, As the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford automobiles that were previously deemed luxurry items. In addition, Chinese society is and undergoing an extensive and Profound transformation In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.

what about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brands will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Tapanese brands will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：line

批改：bar chart是柱状图

原文：2008

批改：前加from

原文：The line chart clearly depicts the proportion of certain brands of domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substaintially risen to 33%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a significant decline of 10% during the same period2008 to 2009. Simultaneously,the perentage of American brands remained stable and steady.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：As

批改：as小写

原文：and

批改：多余删去

批改：用句号断句

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, As the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford automobiles that were previously deemed luxurry items. In addition, Chinese society is and undergoing an extensive and Profound transformation In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：what

批改：what首字母大写

原文：Tapanese

批改：Japanese

原文：what about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brands will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Tapanese brands will likely continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构完整以及正确使用标点符号断句；语法方面，总体来看语法基础还不错。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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