2011年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

当你坐在考研英语二考场，面对2011年大作文题目的那一瞬间，是否能快速组织起一篇结构清晰、表达地道的高分文章？本文这篇批改例文，正是考研英语二作文范文话题下的标准范本，适合每一位考研英语备考生反复研读。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in market shares of certain brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic cars was approximately 26%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 31%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this pnenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s automotive industry in responding to these changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic deveropment, the younger generation, particularly those born in 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomeron in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic cars is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese and American cars will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in market shares of certain brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic cars was approximately 26%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 31%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：pnenomenon

批改：phenomenon

原文：deveropment

批改：development

原文：phenomeron

批改：phenomenon

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this pnenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s automotive industry in responding to these changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic deveropment, the younger generation, particularly those born in 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomeron in the chart is unsurprising

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic cars is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese and American cars will likely continue to decrease.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免单词拼写错误。再接再厉。

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