考研英语二2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the market rate of some car brand in China in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of Japanese brands was approximately 35%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially decreased to around 25%. In contrast, the proportion of Chinese brands experienced a increase of about 5% during the same from 2008 to 2009. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brand remained stable and steady.

The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country’s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound production system, enabling Chinese brands to have ample competition power of market. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese brand is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：rate

批改：share，固定用法，此处用复数

原文：brand

批改：复数

原文：same

批改：same period

原文：brand

批改：brands

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the market rate of some car brand in China in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of Japanese brands was approximately 35%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially decreased to around 25%. In contrast, the proportion of Chinese brands experienced a increase of about 5% during the same from 2008 to 2009. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brand remained stable and steady.

批改：较准确描述了图表内容

原文： reason

批改：后面列了两个原因，用复数

原文：a

批改：an

原文：ample competition power of market

批改：优化一下，market competitiveness市场竞争力

原文：The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country’s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound production system, enabling Chinese brands to have ample competition power of market. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：论据充分，建议多使用从句

原文： brand

批改：brands

原文：brand

批改：brands

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese brand is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand will likely continue to decrease.

批改：预测趋势，呼应主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15分。

1. 题目要求：作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明；

2. 语言表达：运用复杂的高级词汇，也有宾语从句，建议再加入其他类型的从句，丰富表达

3. 行文逻辑：采用恰当的衔接手法，行文流畅，内容连贯；

4. 建议：要深刻吃透老师的模板，使用自己的语言，灵活运用在各类题目中，进一步丰富自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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