2014年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

As the chart clearly shows the changes about population vary from cities to contrysides in China during the twenty years. In 1990, the population in cities was only three million, and doubled in 201y. By contrast, the rural population experienced a decline.

The core reason for the obvous phenomenon can be summerized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our contry"s rapld and dynamic development, the younger generation, especially those born in 2000s, are likely to look for careers in cities. They have become the primary workforce group. Sure enough, as the conductor orchestrating the sympony of changes, our govenments have made tremendous efforts to elevate our life qualification, enabling people to live in urban that were previously deemed impossble. What"s more, the fundumental reason for this phenomenon is the significant prograss made by technology in responding to the reform and opening up.

What about future trends? In my vew, there will be an increasingly number of people live in urbar rather the surburbs

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：e chart clearly shows the changes about population vary from cities to contrysides in China during the twenty years.

批改：第一句是语法杂糅句，同时用了As the chart shows和the changes vary...两个主谓结构。应改为：The chart clearly shows the changes in population between urban and rural areas in China over twenty years.

原文：1990, the population in cities was only three million, and doubled in 201y.

批改：contrysides 拼写错误，应为 countryside。 three million 与图表数据（3亿/300 million）严重不符。 201y 拼写错误，应为 2010

原文：oubled in 201y. By contrast, the rural p

批改：and doubled 表述不完整，可改为 and had doubled to 666 million by 2010。 experienced a decline 过于笼统，应补充具体数据，如 ...a significant decline, dropping from 834 million to 674 million.

原文：e chart clearly shows the changes about population vary from cities to contrysides in China during the twenty years. In 1990, the population in cities was only three million, and doubled in 201y. By contrast, the rural population experienced a decline.

批改：本段意图明确，但关键的数据描述出现了较多错误。图表作文的第一段，数据的准确性是第一位的

原文：he core reason for the obvous phenomenon can be summerized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our contry"s rapld and dynamic development, the younger generation, especially those born in 2000s, are likely to look for careers in cities. They have become the primary workforce group. Sure enough, as the conductor orchestrating the sympony of changes, our govenments have made tremendous efforts to elevate our life qualification, enabling people to live in urban that were previously deemed impossble. What"s more, the fundumental reason for this phenomenon is the significant prograss made by technology in responding to the reform and opening up.

批改：obvous, summerized, contry"s, rapld, sympony, govenments, impossble, fundumental, prograss 均存在拼写错误。正确拼写依次为：obvious, summarized, country"s, rapid, symphony, governments, impossible, fundamental, progress。

原文： life qualificatio

批改：life qualification 是中式表达，应为 quality of life。

原文：o live in urban that

批改：live in urban 后缺少名词，应为 live in urban areas。

原文：ignificant prograss made by technology in responding to the reform and opening up

批改：最后一句 the fundamental reason... is the progress... in responding to... 表意不清。技术进步是改革开放的结果，而非原因。建议改为 ...can also be attributed to the technological progress driven by the Reform and Opening-up policy.

原文：e core reason for the obvous phenomenon can be summerized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our contry"s rapld and dynamic development, the younger generation, especially those born in 2000s, are likely to look for careers in cities. They have become the primary workforce group. Sure enough, as the conductor orchestrating the sympony of changes, our govenments have made tremendous efforts to elevate our life qualification, enabling people to live in urban that were previously deemed impossble. What"s more, the fundumental reason for this phenomenon is the significant prograss made by technology in responding to the reform and opening

批改：本段的逻辑框架很好，从个人选择、政府角色和宏观政策多个角度分析，思路开阔。但拼写错误非常密集

原文：What about future trends? In my vew, there wi

批改：vew 拼写错误，应为 view。 an increasingly number 搭配错误，应为 an increasing number。

原文：f people live in urbar rather the surburbs

批改：people live 语法错误，there will be... people live 包含两个动词。应改为 there will be an increasing number of people living... 或 more and more people will live...。 urbar, surburb 拼写错误，应为 urban areas, suburbs。 rather the surburb 不完整，应为 rather than in the suburbs。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：5分

总评与建议：

尤其是在拼写和基本语法方面还需要改善。这直接导致你的很多好想法没有被清晰地表达出来。

给你的核心建议：

打好基础：当前阶段，请暂时不要追求像“orchestrating the symphony of changes”这样的复杂比喻。优先保证所有基础词汇（如country, government, view, urban）的拼写100%正确，以及主谓宾、there be句型等基本语法结构无误。 一篇文章的得分，首先取决于它的语言准确性。

放慢速度，仔细检查：在考场上写完作文后，一定要留出几分钟时间，不做任何别的，只检查拼写和单复数、时态等简单语法。你就能自己发现并改正很多错误。

熟记核心数据：图表作文的第一段，请务必把关键数据准确地背下来

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