2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二写作技巧每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2014年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart which is given above compares the quantity variation of urban and rural populations in China over the period of 20 years, manifesting that population movement had become a major tendency. In 1990, the number of urban populations was approximately 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had sharply risen to about 666 million. In contrast, the rural population experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

From my perspective, the core reasons for the above-mentioned phenomenon can be summarized as follows. First and foremost, the Chinese government provided an array of welfare policies to develop the process of countryside urbanization. Conveniently and easily, the rural residents had more opportunities to find jobs in the background of that era. In addition, for the sake of pursuing a color-filling life, rural residents chose to live in cities increasingly. Owing to these factors, the data presented in the bar chart is easy to understand.

I am confident that the number of rural populations will likely continue to decrease.In contrast, the number of urban population will increase in the future.The tendency that the booming rural populations movement will continually play a critical role in urbanization.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart which is given above compares the quantity variation of urban and rural populations in China over the period of 20 years, manifesting that population movement had become a major tendency. In 1990, the number of urban populations was approximately 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had sharply risen to about 666 million. In contrast, the rural population experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：From my perspective, the core reasons for the above-mentioned phenomenon can be summarized as follows. First and foremost, the Chinese government provided an array of welfare policies to develop the process of countryside urbanization. Conveniently and easily, the rural residents had more opportunities to find jobs in the background of that era. In addition, for the sake of pursuing a color-filling life, rural residents chose to live in cities increasingly. Owing to these factors, the data presented in the bar chart is easy to understand.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：I am confident that the number of rural populations will likely continue to decrease.In contrast, the number of urban population will increase in the future.The tendency that the booming rural populations movement will continually play a critical role in urbanization.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行分析总结，起到了点题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。

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