2014年考研英语二大作文怎么写？附例文批改

面对2014年考研英语二大作文，许多同学最关心的是有没有可复制的写作模板。本文带来的高分范文严格遵循考研英语作文模板高分框架，从开头引入、主体论证到结尾呼应，全文清晰流畅，是考研英语考生的必备学习资料。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart depicts the changing number of the people living in the cities or in the countryside during 20 years (from 1990-2010). In 1990, the number of urban people was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of people living in the countryside experienced a slow decline of 160 million during the same time.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. The fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in cities. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are content with more material satisfaction, making more and more people leaving from the countruside and go for cities. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the number of urban people will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of countryside people will likely to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：countruside

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 countryside

原文： to

批改：语法错误，will后面跟动词原形，所以删除to

原文：leaving

批改：动词用法 make sb do sth. 所以改为 leave

原文：go for cities.

批改：介词搭配不当，改为 go to cities .或者语意更完善一点改为 move to cities

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13 /15

从结构层面看，本文采用三段式写作，开头清楚表明图片，中间进行了分析，最后做出了总结；

从内容层面看，第二段原因分析非常贴切，内容丰富具体；

从语言层面看，单词拼写和语法上有一些错误，影响评分；

建议：检查单词拼写，检查语法常识：介词搭配、动词用法、情态动词will后面要加动词原形。好好分析范文，积累地道表达，加油！

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