2019年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2019年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the different choices of graduates at a certain university in 2013 and 2018. In 2013, the percentage of graduates who get a job was 68.1%, but by 2018, this rate had substantially decreased to 60.7%. In contrast, the proportion of graduates who chose to pursue further education experienced a sigmficant increase of 77% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of those who chose to start their own lusiness remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enabling graduates to have ample opportunites for further education. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges and chances, improving acadomc qualifications is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of graduates who chose to pursue further education will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of graduates who get a job will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：语法正确

原文：sigmficant

批改：significant

原文： lusiness

批改：business

原文：get a job

批改：注意时态，要用一般过去时，且改为 chose employment 更精确

原文：77%

批改：此处是 7.7%

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确

原文：acadomc

批改：academic

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

批改：语法正确

原文：chose

批改：此处用一般现在时即可，改为 choose

原文：get a job

批改：改为 choose employment

批改：建议将 选择创业的毕业生的比例 也进行预测

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2.拼写要细心 3. 结尾段将图表中的元素都预测完整，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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