考研英语二2011年大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二大作文每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2011年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the domestic market proportion of car"s brand.In 2008,the percentage of Chinese brand was approximately 25%,but by 2009,this rate had gradually risen to 30%.In contrast,the proportion of Japanese brand experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period from 2008-2009.Simultaneously,the percenage of American brand.

The core reasons for the observed phenomemon can be summarized as follows.To start with,Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation.In my view,the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.In addition,against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development,the younger generation,are accustomed to choosing domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group.Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends?I am confident that the proportion of Chinese brand"s car will steadily increase in the following decades.In contrat,the proportion of others will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：market proportion

批改：用market share更合适

原文：the percenage of American brand.

批改：这句话没写完，需要补充remained stable

原文：contrat

批改：拼写错误，contrast

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomemon can be summarized as follows.To start with,Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation.In my view,the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.In addition,against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development,the younger generation,are accustomed to choosing domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group.Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：原因这段没什么问题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1.题目要求：文章很好地完成了题目要求。第一段清晰地描述了图表变化趋势。第二段提供了原因分析，第三段展望了未来。结构完整，内容切题。

2.语言表达：文章中词汇量较好，能使用很多高阶词汇。句式有一定变化，衔接词使用得当。文章中有部分拼写错误需要格外留意。

3.行文逻辑：文章结构清晰，先描述数据变化，再探讨原因，最后预测未来趋势，符合常见的图表作文写作逻辑。

4.建议：建议同学写作完成后，一定要通篇读一遍，这个过程重点抓语法和拼写错误，这种不必要的问题一定要扼杀掉。另外坚持背诵锦囊句，多练习积累手感和语感，一定要坚持自己写作文，自己写完之后再去借鉴范文，学习范文的优秀表达，这样会更快提升，能在正式考试中根据不同的题目要求写出更切题的文章。继续加油(ง •_•)ง，相信你一定能成功，Go Go!

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