2023年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

启航教育考研英语教研组精心筛选了2023年考研英语二大作文真题原文及高分批改范例。本篇范文中，老师对每一句都给出修改建议，是考研英语二作文范文备考资料库中的精品，特别推荐给参加2027考研的学子。

一、2023年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2023年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2023年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The line clearly depicts the level of health literacy among Chinese residents from 2012 to 2021. In 2012, the percentage of the health literacy was 8.8%, but by 2021, this rate had substantially risen to 25.4%.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized, as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound medical system, enabling residents to have ample opportunities for obtaining basic information and medical service. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with more material satisfaction; they also pursue physical health. Consider these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of health literacy is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：line

批改：line chart

原文：The line clearly depicts the level of health literacy among Chinese residents from 2012 to 2021. In 2012, the percentage of the health literacy was 8.8%, but by 2021, this rate had substantially risen to 25.4%.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

原文：,

批改：逗号去掉

原文：more

批改：mere

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized, as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound medical system, enabling residents to have ample opportunities for obtaining basic information and medical service. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with more material satisfaction; they also pursue physical health. Consider these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of health literacy is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句正确使用标点；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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