2023年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

2023年考研英语二大作文属于典型的图表作文，要求考生准确描述数据变化并深入解读现象。本文精解的这篇柱状图批改范例，完整覆盖考研英语二真题常考图表的描述思路，是考研英语图表类作文的标杆范例。

一、2023年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2023年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2023年考研英语二大作文批改例文

Dear Jack,

I am Li Ming, your partner who will do a survey with you. I am writing the email to you in purpose of putting forward my plan for the survey on the protection of old houses in an ancient town and asking for your opinion.

From my point of view, It"s well-known that the protection of old houses is of great significance for Chinese culture. Concerning the survey, the plan is as follows. To start with, we should refer to information to acknowledge old houses. Additionally, I think we had better interview some people living in the ancient town and experts" advice.

I appreciate if you give some suggestions on it. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely, Li Ming

老师我这篇跟24年大作文交反了，麻烦您帮我都看看谢谢老师

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：I am Li Ming, your partner who will do a survey with you. I am writing the email to you in purpose of putting forward my plan for the survey on the protection of old houses in an ancient town and asking for your opinion.

批改：点明写信目的，言简意赅

原文：From my point of view, It"s well-known that the protection of old houses is of great significance for Chinese culture. Concerning the survey, the plan is as follows. To start with, we should refer to information to acknowledge old houses. Additionally, I think we had better interview some people living in the ancient town and experts" advice.

批改：该段落道歉的内容和理由很全面。

原文：appreciate

批改：would appreciate

原文：Li Ming

批改：人名要另起一行

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：8/10

1.内容符合题目的要求，能够仔细全面阐述信件的内容。

2.词汇方面，拼写无误；句式方面，基础句式结构掌握的还不错；语法方面，总体来看语法基础较好，注意最后一段第一句话是虚拟语气的用法，需用would。

3.逻辑结构清晰，论证理由较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4.修改建议：总体来看内容全面，逻辑清晰，格式也要符合信件的写作规范，尤其是落款处的格式要格外注意。再接再厉！

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