考研英语一2023年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、考研英语一2023年大作文题目

考研英语一2023年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay based on the picture below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture briefly, 2) interpret the implied meaning, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2023年大作文批改例文

The picture illustrates a scene in which a great many people are watching the dragon-boat race. What arouses much attention is that two old men praise that the race shows a booming scene which is much better than before. In this festival picture, the underlying meanings are far-reaching and thought-provoking.

Clearly, the picture reveals the phenomenon that traditional festival activities are achieving more and more popularity. Such wide prevalence has it enjoyed in present-age society that much attention is paid to its existence. There is a combination of factors responsible for it. Firstly, it is largely attributed to the enhancement of cultural confidence. More and more citizens would like to learn about our traditional culture and participate in activities concerning traditional festivals. Meanwhile, it has much to do with the effort of the government. It is too hard to hold such a number of activities without the support of the government. Thus, it is understandable for the phenomenon to prevail.

Living in such a harmonious society, there cannot be any hesitation to engage in the colorful and meaningful traditional festival activities. I believe that our traditional festivals must be more bustling in the future.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The picture illustrates a scene in which a great many people are watching the dragon-boat race. What arouses much attention is that two old men praise that the race shows a booming scene which is much better than before. In this festival picture, the underlying meanings are far-reaching and thought-provoking.

批改：对漫画内容描述的很全面，语言连贯。

原文：Clearly, the picture reveals the phenomenon that traditional festival activities are achieving more and more popularity. Such wide prevalence has it enjoyed in present-age society that much attention is paid to its existence. There is a combination of factors responsible for it. Firstly, it is largely attributed to the enhancement of cultural confidence. More and more citizens would like to learn about our traditional culture and participate in activities concerning traditional festivals. Meanwhile, it has much to do with the effort of the government. It is too hard to hold such a number of activities without the support of the government. Thus, it is understandable for the phenomenon to prevail.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：Living in such a harmonious society, there cannot be any hesitation to engage in the colorful and meaningful traditional festival activities. I believe that our traditional festivals must be more bustling in the future.

批改：起到了呼吁和号召的作用，紧扣主题，语言连贯完整。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：19/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础很好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬，继续加油。

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