考研英语一2017年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2017年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand cartoon, there is a man, lying in his chair and saying "I have so many books!". On the contrary, in the right-hand one, there is a man sitting on the chair reading a book and saying "I will try my best to read 20 books this year." Evidently, the cartoon intends to convey to readers that to think and to do is the brush that paints a bright future, while to think without doing anything is the shackle that hinders progress.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, although thinking plays an important part in our lives, taking measures to make our imaginations become reality is more meaningful. What"s more, just thinking without doing anything is a waste of time.

In brief, we should not only think what we want to do but also take actions to achieve our target. We should actively support and advocate this practice.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：In the left-hand cartoon, there is a man, lying in his chair and saying "I have so many books!". On the contrary, in the right-hand one, there is a man sitting on the chair reading a book and saying "I will try my best to read 20 books this year." Evidently, the cartoon intends to convey to readers that to think and to do is the brush that paints a bright future, while to think without doing anything is the shackle that hinders progress.

批改：描述图片内容，符合题目要求

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, although thinking plays an important part in our lives, taking measures to make our imaginations become reality is more meaningful. What"s more, just thinking without doing anything is a waste of time.

批改：提出了自己的观点，但是第二个观点只有一句话，需要再充实一点，中间论述段落应该篇幅最长

原文：In brief, we should not only think what we want to do but also take actions to achieve our target. We should actively support and advocate this practice.

批改：总结全文，符合结尾段的内容和结构

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18

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