考研英语二2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the market proportion of any brands of domestic car from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of Chinese brands was approximately 25%, but by 2009, the rate had gradually risen to around 30%. In constrast, the number of Japanese car experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American’s car remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation particularly these born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic car and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s maufacturing industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of domestic car will steadily in the following decades. In contrast, the number of Japanese car will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：market proportion

批改：要么改为 market shares, 要么直接写为 proportion

原文：any brands of domestic car

批改：此处指的是国内市场部分汽车品牌的比例，改为 certain brands in the domestic car market

原文：30%

批改：此处为 32% 或者 33%

原文：constrast

批改：contrast

原文：the number of Japanese car

批改：图表数字都是百分数，改为 the proportion of Japanese cars

原文：American’s car

批改：改为 American cars

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

原文：generation

批改：加逗号

原文：these

批改：改为 those

原文：car

批改：可数名词单数形式不能单独存在，改为复数 cars

原文：chinese

批改：首字母大写

批改：语法正确，内容表达也很好

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

原文：the number of domestic car

批改：改为 the proportion of domestic cars

原文：the number of Japanese car

批改：the proportion of Japanese cars

原文：relatively stable

批改：形容词短语不能修饰动词，删去

批改：内容表达不错，多注意语法问题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2. 拼写要细心，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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