考研英语二2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

启航教育作为考研英语培训领域的知名品牌，每年都会整理发布当年的启航考研英语高分范文。本文呈现的2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文中，每一处失分点都已被老师精准订正，是2027考生不可错过的写作资料。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of market shares among some car brands in our country from 2008 to 2009.In 2008,the proportion of domestic brands was about 25%,but by 2009,this rate has substantially risen to approximately 31%.In contrast,the proportion of japanese brands experienced a significant decline of about 10%.Simultaneously,the percentage of American brands remain stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of thechanges,our government has made tremendous efforts to drive the development of green-energy car and lower its prises,making the populace to choose the domestic brands on their willing.In addition,against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development,the younger generation,particularly those born in 1990s and 2000s,are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group.Considering those factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about the future trends?I"m confident that the proportion of domestic car brands is a clear sign of social development and will steadily increase in the following decades.In contrast,the proportion of Japanese brands will likely continue to decrease and the proportion of American brands will remain relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：japanese

批改：Japanese大写

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of market shares among some car brands in our country from 2008 to 2009.In 2008,the proportion of domestic brands was about 25%,but by 2009,this rate has substantially risen to approximately 31%.In contrast,the proportion of japanese brands experienced a significant decline of about 10%.Simultaneously,the percentage of American brands remain stable and steady.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：prises

批改：price

原文：to

批改：to去掉，make sb do sth

原文：those

批改：these

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of thechanges,our government has made tremendous efforts to drive the development of green-energy car and lower its prises,making the populace to choose the domestic brands on their willing.In addition,against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development,the younger generation,particularly those born in 1990s and 2000s,are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group.Considering those factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about the future trends?I"m confident that the proportion of domestic car brands is a clear sign of social development and will steadily increase in the following decades.In contrast,the proportion of Japanese brands will likely continue to decrease and the proportion of American brands will remain relatively stable.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，国家名首字母要大写；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，要了解make sb do sth的用法。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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